Saturday, September 15, 2012

Reflection

         On my literacy narrative essay, I feel as if I could have used a little more imagery. I also have a difficult time with going into detail. I am not an open person so actually going deep into detail is hard for me. Writing long papers intimidates me, because I have trouble expressing detail. I could easily say everything I need to say in two pages. I don't want or like to ramble on, but this paper was easier for me, since I know the subject matter so well. Mrs. Thomas' comments and advice really helped me to dig deeper into detail making this paper more interesting for the reader. I enjoyed writing this paper!

2 comments:

  1. I am the same way about details and writing long papers. It really is intimidating, especially when you don't really know what you're writing about, like with research papers. Those are the worst! But this paper was easier to write since it was a subject that was very close to us. Mrs. Thomas' comments helped me too! This was actually an enjoyable paper for me to write!

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  2. Me and you have some of the exact same troubles when it comes to writing papers. You were right I could've been finished with my paper in two pages. I don't like getting into details either and I'm not good at it. Mrs Thomas' comments helped me alot also.

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